I was trying to write the beginning to a short story and listening to 'Massive':

On the 8th day, god created suffering and war and he was pleased with what he saw.

That’s what they say anyway.

Or did he make those things on the 6th day? No. I’ve never heard that. That was the day he made loneliness, fear and toothache; after all, that was the day he made man. They say that he made me too. They say a lot though. They say he watches over you too, hard to believe, isn’t it?

Any criticism or opinions would be great